Hi Tina I so enjoyed reading your information report on Gazelles. You know my son Zameer likes reading about animals and likes to find interesting facts about them. I will ask him to read your information report. It is awesome to see how you have used paragraphs in your information report. Next thing you could work on is clearly setting out your paragraphs and have pictures that clearly show what the paragraph is about. Ka Pai Tina!
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Hi Tina
ReplyDeleteI so enjoyed reading your information report on Gazelles. You know my son Zameer likes reading about animals and likes to find interesting facts about them. I will ask him to read your information report.
It is awesome to see how you have used paragraphs in your information report. Next thing you could work on is clearly setting out your paragraphs and have pictures that clearly show what the paragraph is about. Ka Pai Tina!
Kia ora Manpreet,
DeleteThank you for commenting on our work and also I hope Zameer enjoys reading our information report!Thank you
Kia orana my name is Desziah thanks for telling me so much stuff about gazelles,I didn't know any of the facts so thanks again.
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